8 ways to make your free gift better

The best free gifts solve problems.

The best free gifts solve problems.

A lot of free gifts don’t feel like “gifts” at all.

Don’t let this happen to you.

Because that free gift is the one thing that separates the website visitors who click away from the people who you have a shot of building a relationship with over time.

So, here are 8 simple ways to make your free gift better:

#1 – Give it a hot title. Something that people WANT. Something CLEAR. Make it sound like a “thing” – call it a guide, report, blueprint or kit. Remember: the title is what will make people decide to give you … Read the rest >

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Henry David Thoreau Was Right

Simple is good. Especially in writing copy.

Simple is good. Especially in writing copy.

“Our life is frittered away by detail. Simplify, simplify, simplify! I say, let your affairs be as two or three, and not a hundred or a thousand; instead of a million count half a dozen, and keep your accounts on your thumbnail.”

Dude.

Henry David Thoreau was right.

One of the things that plagues business owners who are crafting their own copy, be it web copy, emails, or sales pages, is our crazy need to throw everything we’ve got at our audience (in the hopes that SOMETHING will convince them to hire us).

Let’s call this the “everything but the … Read the rest >

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8 Ways Copy is Different From Other Writing.

Copy and regular writing is apples + oranges

Copy and regular writing is apples + oranges

News flash! The writing skills you learned in school don’t prepare you to write copy (copy = “words that sell”).

Before we go any further, there are two important distinctions you need to know:

1) Copywriting is different than regular writing.

2) Copywriting is different from content.

Let’s look at the second one first. Content writing is more like regular writing – think editorial or magazine article. The goal is to inform your reader of something that’s useful, say, how to make better food choices when their blood sugar is low or 3 places to meet quality clients without going … Read the rest >

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3 secrets to get in the mood to write hot copy

Why don’t you slip into something more comfortable?

Why don’t you slip into something more comfortable?

We ended the year with a plea not to be a copywriting zombie.

So it’s only fair that we start the New Year off with the right tone.

I’m talking Marvin Gaye, people. Barry White. Gnarls Barkley.

Whatever gets you in the mood.

As last year wrapped up, I noticed that my clients and colleagues had writing projects they were focused on.

And some of them actually admitted to me that they were enjoying the process.

A few of them even mentioned that it was a treat to write.

Now, this is really, really good news. And so I … Read the rest >

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How NOT to write copy like a zombie

Don’t be a copywriting zombie. Find YOUR voice.

Don’t be a copywriting zombie. Find YOUR voice.

Happy holidays, superstars!

As a special tribute to the end of the year, this article is about zombies.

Copywriting zombies.

You know who they are.

You get their emails.

You go to their sales pages.

You may actually even LIKE the person, and trust that they are doing good work.

But the way they write about that work sounds like the zombies wrote it.

When zombies write copy, they use a rigid formula.

They don’t express real emotion.

They just hunt for brains to manipulate.

Examples of copywriting zombies at work:

“Are you OVERWHELMED by getting your kids out the Read the rest >

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5 sales writing archetypes that make NO money

In these parts, we talk about messaging, and we talk about writing copy, and we talk about how to do it in a way that works AND stands out as meaningful in a marketplace of hype and hot air.

But I’ve been mostly silent about the ways I watch business owners sabotage their own results in their writing.

Until now.

See, there are some archetypes when it comes to writing copy (copy = “words that sell”). I share them because you may notice that some of them feel rather familiar to you. If that’s the case, there’s a prescription for … Read the rest >

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Please stop “touching their pain.”

Pouring salt in wounds won’t sell more. Also, it’s not nice.

Pouring salt in wounds won’t sell more. Also, it’s not nice.

One of the things you always hear about writing copy (copy = “words that sell”) is that you need to “touch their pain.”

That is, you need to stir up whatever pain your potential clients are in, so that they FEEL it, and recognize that they are in the market for a solution.

Typically, it’s the solution you offer.

Now, when I am writing with a client and he says “I know I need to touch their pain,” I smile ever so faintly, and step on to my soapbox.

After I take a deep breath, here is what I say:… Read the rest >

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Can you build a business WITHOUT writing?

Avoiding writing is like cutting your business growth off at the knees

Avoiding writing is like cutting your business growth off at the knees

This is a wake-up call, my sweet petunias.

Let’s cut right to the chase: if you can’t write—or if you don’t like to write—it’s going to be hard to do anything else in your marketing.

Writing copy (“copy” = words that sell) is a core skill that has a direct impact on your ability to grow your business.

Especially if you intend to leverage online marketing to work with people who don’t live in the same place you do.

Here’s why:

1) Writing is the main way you communicate with many people at the same time.

You need to be … Read the rest >

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What Weird Al Taught Me About Business

Part of what you’re selling is how you live your life.

Part of what you’re selling is how you live your life.

I don’t care that much about celebrities.

But I totally 110% freaked out when I met my childhood idol, Weird Al Yankovic.

It was 5 years ago, in the livestock barn at the fairgrounds in Bozeman, Montana.

I’d been working for 8 hours as a “runner” for the band. I drove Weird Al’s drummer, guitarist, and bass guitarist around town. I picked up organic treats for Al (can I call him Al?) at the local co-op. I took tickets and checked people’s pockets for beer bottles.

And I did all that to get a free ticket to see a guy … Read the rest >

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Are you attracting less than ideal clients?

You don't have to work with clients you don't enjoy.

You don't have to work with clients you don't enjoy.

As a copywriter and writing teacher, I get a lot of questions from business owners about how to express what they do in a way that makes other people want it… while feeling 100% aligned with who THEY really are and what they’re about in this world.

But often, there is a hidden problem beneath this.

And that problem is that they are attracting clients who are LESS than ideal.

These clients are REALLY stuck. They don’t have a habit of regularly investing in themselves, in support, in what they need to get results. They ask to barter instead of … Read the rest >

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